Paragraph to Essay


Outlining an Essay

Title : Welcoming Ramadan

I.             Introductory paragraph

Introduction :
Sentence 1 : Ramadan is one of  awaited moment of Moslems in the whole world.
Sentence 2 : People will do various activities to welcoming Ramadan.
Sentence 3 : Some people will gather with their family before Ramadan comes to celebrate this moment and enjoy the joyous activities, but some of them are not because of any reason.
Thesis Statement : I do have some favorite activities to welcoming Ramadan in my hometown with closest people around me, especially my family and friends.

II.            Body

Paragraph 1 : Visiting relatives and neighbors
Ø Topic Sentence : The first, I will visit my relatives and neighbors to asking forgiveness and bring them some cakes.
-     Major Support : This tradition is aimed to maintain a good relationship among us, so we can entering this blessed month with pure heart after forgiving each other.
-  Minor Support : I always feel excited to do this tradition because I can get in touch directly with my relatives and neighbors.
-    Concluding Sentence : This moment gives me chance to reunited with my big family and neighbors.

Paragraph 2 : Cooking Rendang with mom.
Ø  Topic Sentence  : The second one is cooking Rendang with my mom.
-   Major Support  : Rendang is an essential dish which should be provided to welcoming special moment in my hometown, such welcoming Ramadan.
-   Minor support : It takes long time until cook perfectly, usually my mom will ask me to accompany her in the kitchen to cooking Rendang.
-     Concluding Sentence : This is bonding time for both of us because we have limited time to spend together.

Paragraph 3 : Cleaning home with siblings.
Ø  Topic Sentence : The third one is cleaning home with my siblings.
-      Major Support : We also have a chit chat and discuss many things while cleaning home.
-      Minor Support : I enjoy to listen every knowledge and story they tell to me.
-   Concluding Sentence : I feel thankful to have siblings like them because they always teach me anything that very useful for my future.


Paragraph 4 : Go to the river.
ØTopic Sentence : The last one is the most fun activity which is go to the river with relatives and friends to take a bath a day before Ramadan comes.
-      Major Support : This tradition is called Balimau.
-  Minor Supports : This is also one of generation to generation traditions that still maintained until today in my hometown.
-     Minor Supports : On this moment, We are not only go to the river for bathe but also eat together in the rice fields or riverside.
-   Concluding Sentence : Walk on the rice fields together, bathing in the river together, and eat accompanied by sounds of nature together with friends are memorable activities for me before Ramadan comes.

III.          Concluding Paragraph :

My loveable activities to welcoming Ramadan in my hometown are spending time with my friends and family through visiting their house, cooking Rendang with mom, cleaning home with siblings, then go to the river to take a bath and eat together with friends a day before Ramadan comes . I tend to spend my time with them to welcoming Ramadan and create memorable experiences to be remembered over the times.

Essay
Welcoming Ramadan
Ramadan is one of awaited moment of Moslems in the whole world. People will do various activities to welcoming Ramadan. Some people will gather with their family before Ramadan comes to celebrate this moment and enjoy the joyous activities, but some of them are not because of any reason. I do have some favorite activities to welcoming Ramadan in my hometown with closest people around me, especially my family and friends.
The first, I will visit my relatives and neighbors to asking forgiveness and bring them some cakes. This tradition is aimed to maintain a good relationship among us, so we can enter this blessed month with pure heart after forgiving each other. I always feel excited to do this tradition because I can get in touch directly with my relatives and neighbors. This moment gives me chance to reunited with my big family and neighbors.
The second one is cooking Rendang with my mom. Rendang is an essential dish which should be provided to welcoming special moment in my hometown, such welcoming Ramadan. It takes long time until cook perfectly, usually my mom will ask me to accompany her in the kitchen to cooking Rendang. This is bonding time for both of us because we have limited time to spend together.
The third one is cleaning home with my siblings. We also have a chit chat and discuss many things while cleaning home. I enjoy to listen every knowledge and story they tell to me. I feel thankful to have siblings like them because they always teach me anything that very useful for my future.
The last one is the most fun activity which is go to the river with relatives and friends to take a bath a day before Ramadan comes. This tradition is called Balimau. This is also one of generation to generation traditions that still maintained until today in my hometown. On this moment, we are not only go to the river for bathe but also eat together in the rice fields or riverside. Walk on the rice fields together, bathing in the river together, and eat accompanied by sounds of nature together with friends are memorable activities for me before Ramadan comes.
My loveable activities to welcoming Ramadan in my hometown are spending time with my friends and family through visiting their house, cooking Rendang with mom, cleaning home with siblings, then go to the river to take a bath and eat together with friends a day before Ramadan comes. I tend to spend my time with them to welcoming Ramadan and create memorable experiences to be remembered over the times.


Komentar

  1. Hai intan, I like you explain your essay. Your outline is very clear and your essay contain good structure. Good Job :)

    BalasHapus
  2. Hi intan, for me your essay and the outline is quite good and correct. Good job intan!

    BalasHapus
  3. Hey, Intan. You made it as same as the structure. You already did a great job. keep it up!

    BalasHapus
  4. I am so appreciate on your essay, it looks so good. But you must add more the minor ideas because you make it shortly. Thank you

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. The minor support is intentionally short, thanks for comment ^^

      Hapus
  5. Hey intan. What a good activities in ramadhan. !! Your essat and outline hve structured and completed.good job girl!!!

    BalasHapus
  6. Hi intan, your essay is good and well structure... It's easy to read.. 👍

    BalasHapus
  7. on "Ramadan is one of awaited moment of Moslems in the whole world. People will do various activities to welcoming Ramadan. Some people will gather with their family before Ramadan comes to celebrate this moment and enjoy the joyous activities, but some of them are not because of any reason. " you may need change the color of the font.
    But after all you essay and paragraph are correct. (Thumbs up)

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. I think it is not necessary, thank you for comment ^^

      Hapus
  8. Great Intan! You delivering your story well and show the structure of the essay correctly.
    Keep it up♡

    BalasHapus
  9. i like your outline and essay because its simple and clear! good job

    BalasHapus
  10. Hai intan,
    i like your story ramadan
    your essay is good, because you make it according to the structure, but i think you should add more in minor sentence because it is too short.

    BalasHapus
  11. Hi, intan. Your essay is really good. But, it would be better if you do not put the outline in a table, it will be tidier :)

    BalasHapus
  12. Hi Intan, I like your essay. it is neatly written and the structure is really good. Good job!

    BalasHapus
  13. Haloo intan, your essay is very good, the outline of the essay is very structure because you use table... good job

    BalasHapus
  14. Hi, Intan! I like the way you explain it into an essay.It was so fun and easy to read! Your essay has a good structure and the outline is very clear. Good job! ❤

    BalasHapus

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