Paragraph to Essay
Outlining an Essay
Title : Welcoming Ramadan
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I.
Introductory paragraph
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Introduction :
Sentence 1 : Ramadan is one of awaited moment of Moslems in the whole
world.
Sentence 2 : People will do various activities to
welcoming Ramadan.
Sentence 3 : Some people will gather with their family
before Ramadan comes to celebrate this moment and enjoy the joyous activities,
but some of them are not because of any reason.
Thesis Statement : I do have some favorite activities to
welcoming Ramadan in my hometown with closest people around me, especially my
family and friends.
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II.
Body
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Paragraph 1 : Visiting
relatives and neighbors
Ø Topic
Sentence : The first, I will visit
my relatives and neighbors to asking forgiveness and bring them some cakes.
- Major
Support : This tradition is aimed
to maintain a good relationship among us, so we can entering this blessed
month with pure heart after forgiving each other.
- Minor
Support : I always feel excited to
do this tradition because I can get in touch directly with my relatives and
neighbors.
- Concluding
Sentence : This moment gives me chance
to reunited with my big family and neighbors.
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Paragraph 2 : Cooking
Rendang with mom.
Ø Topic
Sentence : The second one is cooking Rendang with my mom.
- Major
Support : Rendang is an essential dish which should be
provided to welcoming special moment in my hometown, such welcoming Ramadan.
- Minor
support : It takes long time until
cook perfectly, usually my mom will ask me to accompany her in the kitchen to
cooking Rendang.
- Concluding
Sentence : This is bonding time for
both of us because we have limited time to spend together.
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Paragraph 3 : Cleaning
home with siblings.
Ø Topic
Sentence : The third one is
cleaning home with my siblings.
- Major
Support : We also have a chit chat
and discuss many things while cleaning home.
- Minor
Support : I enjoy to listen every knowledge
and story they tell to me.
- Concluding
Sentence : I feel thankful to have
siblings like them because they always teach me anything that very useful for
my future.
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Paragraph 4 : Go to the
river.
ØTopic
Sentence : The last one is the most
fun activity which is go to the river with relatives and friends to take a
bath a day before Ramadan comes.
- Major
Support : This tradition is called
Balimau.
- Minor
Supports : This is also one of
generation to generation traditions that still maintained until today in my
hometown.
- Minor
Supports : On this moment, We are
not only go to the river for bathe but also eat together in the rice fields
or riverside.
- Concluding
Sentence : Walk on the rice fields
together, bathing in the river together, and eat accompanied by sounds of
nature together with friends are memorable activities for me before Ramadan
comes.
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III.
Concluding Paragraph :
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My loveable activities to welcoming
Ramadan in my hometown are spending time with my friends and family through visiting
their house, cooking Rendang with mom, cleaning home with siblings, then go
to the river to take a bath and eat together with friends a day before
Ramadan comes . I tend to spend my time with them to welcoming Ramadan and
create memorable experiences to be remembered over the times.
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Welcoming Ramadan
Ramadan is one of
awaited moment of Moslems in the whole world. People will do various activities
to welcoming Ramadan. Some people will gather with their family before Ramadan
comes to celebrate this moment and enjoy the joyous activities, but some of them
are not because of any reason. I do have some favorite
activities to welcoming Ramadan in my hometown with closest people around me, especially
my family and friends.
The
first, I will visit my relatives and neighbors to asking forgiveness and bring
them some cakes. This tradition is aimed to maintain a good relationship among
us, so we can enter this blessed month with pure heart after forgiving each
other. I always feel excited to do this tradition because I can get in touch
directly with my relatives and neighbors. This moment gives me chance to
reunited with my big family and neighbors.
The
second one is cooking Rendang with my mom. Rendang is an essential dish which
should be provided to welcoming special moment in my hometown, such welcoming
Ramadan. It takes long time until cook perfectly, usually my mom will ask me to
accompany her in the kitchen to cooking Rendang. This is bonding time for both
of us because we have limited time to spend together.
The
third one is cleaning home with my siblings. We also have a chit chat and
discuss many things while cleaning home. I enjoy to listen every knowledge and
story they tell to me. I feel thankful to have siblings like them because they
always teach me anything that very useful for my future.
The
last one is the most fun activity which is go to the river with relatives and
friends to take a bath a day before Ramadan comes. This tradition is called
Balimau. This is also one of generation to generation traditions that still
maintained until today in my hometown. On this moment, we are not only go to
the river for bathe but also eat together in the rice fields or riverside. Walk
on the rice fields together, bathing in the river together, and eat accompanied
by sounds of nature together with friends are memorable activities for me before
Ramadan comes.
My loveable
activities to welcoming Ramadan in my hometown are spending time with my
friends and family through visiting their house, cooking Rendang with mom, cleaning
home with siblings, then go to the river to take a bath and eat together with
friends a day before Ramadan comes. I tend to spend my time with them to
welcoming Ramadan and create memorable experiences to be remembered over the
times.
Hai intan, I like you explain your essay. Your outline is very clear and your essay contain good structure. Good Job :)
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HapusHi intan, for me your essay and the outline is quite good and correct. Good job intan!
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HapusHey, Intan. You made it as same as the structure. You already did a great job. keep it up!
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HapusI am so appreciate on your essay, it looks so good. But you must add more the minor ideas because you make it shortly. Thank you
BalasHapusThe minor support is intentionally short, thanks for comment ^^
HapusHey intan. What a good activities in ramadhan. !! Your essat and outline hve structured and completed.good job girl!!!
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HapusHi intan, your essay is good and well structure... It's easy to read.. 👍
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Hapuson "Ramadan is one of awaited moment of Moslems in the whole world. People will do various activities to welcoming Ramadan. Some people will gather with their family before Ramadan comes to celebrate this moment and enjoy the joyous activities, but some of them are not because of any reason. " you may need change the color of the font.
BalasHapusBut after all you essay and paragraph are correct. (Thumbs up)
I think it is not necessary, thank you for comment ^^
HapusGreat Intan! You delivering your story well and show the structure of the essay correctly.
BalasHapusKeep it up♡
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Hapusi like your outline and essay because its simple and clear! good job
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HapusHai intan,
BalasHapusi like your story ramadan
your essay is good, because you make it according to the structure, but i think you should add more in minor sentence because it is too short.
Hi, intan. Your essay is really good. But, it would be better if you do not put the outline in a table, it will be tidier :)
BalasHapusHi Intan, I like your essay. it is neatly written and the structure is really good. Good job!
BalasHapusHaloo intan, your essay is very good, the outline of the essay is very structure because you use table... good job
BalasHapusHi, Intan! I like the way you explain it into an essay.It was so fun and easy to read! Your essay has a good structure and the outline is very clear. Good job! ❤
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